Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Grimwood's Daughter: Chapter three, page four

Several sketches for this one.  I think I could have gotten away with the first version, but my final take on the last panel has better expressions, or at least it has expressions that fit the dialog better.









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4 comments:

  1. PatrickWedgeOctober 21, 2009 at 3:20 PM

    I liked the first take better. Your mileage may vary.

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  2. Kevin NowlanOctober 21, 2009 at 5:58 PM

    It's a better drawing, but she looks grim instead of seductive. I think she really needed to be smiling a little, not pouting.

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  3. Annie NapoleanOctober 23, 2009 at 3:06 AM

    Did you really do all the work here, it's really great!

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  4. Kevin NowlanOctober 23, 2009 at 6:48 AM

    I didn't do everything; Jan Strnad wrote the script. But thanks!

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