Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Grimwood's Daughter: Chapter three, page four

Several sketches for this one.  I think I could have gotten away with the first version, but my final take on the last panel has better expressions, or at least it has expressions that fit the dialog better.









4 comments:

  1. I liked the first take better. Your mileage may vary.

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  2. It's a better drawing, but she looks grim instead of seductive. I think she really needed to be smiling a little, not pouting.

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  3. Did you really do all the work here, it's really great!

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  4. I didn't do everything; Jan Strnad wrote the script. But thanks!

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