Wednesday, October 21, 2009
Grimwood's Daughter: Chapter three, page four
Several sketches for this one. I think I could have gotten away with the first version, but my final take on the last panel has better expressions, or at least it has expressions that fit the dialog better.
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I liked the first take better. Your mileage may vary.
ReplyDeleteIt's a better drawing, but she looks grim instead of seductive. I think she really needed to be smiling a little, not pouting.
ReplyDeleteDid you really do all the work here, it's really great!
ReplyDeleteI didn't do everything; Jan Strnad wrote the script. But thanks!
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