I'm only showing a portion of the false starts for this page; mostly involving panel three. I also had a lot of trouble with the first panel. I was laboring to set up a sight gag; the ferocious, aggressive Dal we see first is actually a standee. The real Dal is getting his makeup applied. I tried every way I could think of to make it clear but I still think I fell short. Still, I like the page and the rest of the story went much smoother. Hope those Zip-a-tone screens don't look to strange on your monitors. This was for A1 #4, in 1989.
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